For our COP hand in we were put in groups of four this was so two people would stay and look at the other pairs final publication & essay while the other pair looked at their blogs then vice versa. My group was bobby Jones , Abi Nelson & Emily hodge.
My feedback was done by Abi & Emily :-
Context- They gave me tick for excellent. The comments they gave me where that i used a timeline whih was historical , technology - adverts ect. Cultural is shown by the change of views of the jeans.
Synthesis- They gave me a tick for very good. Rough feel/typefaces show awareness of Levis starting as working mens clothing.
Analysis- Tick for Very good - Evaluated on the blog new & old.
Research- Excellent tick - Primary research , categorised/organised , shows understanding.
Communication- Very good - To much text on couple of pages the way it is neatly packaged/stock/ bringing choices show your opinion and speak highly of Levis.
Additional comments- Your pocket is beautiful , lovely font/colour scheme.
I was so pleased with my peer feedback , i wasn't sure what would get written down but the comments that were left made sense i agreed that there was to much text on some pages which i have stated in my evaluation this is something i would later change or apply to another brief. I felt the peer feedback crit was a really good idea the work me and Bobby looked at of Abis & Emilys was of a very high standard as well and it was nice to give some positive feedback to the other pair.
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