In my essay feedback Richard gave me a sheet with feedback criteria and a number for each of the categories.
My overall grade was 66%. He advised me the structure of my essay was put together well as i had an introduction different sections throughout the essay and then my conclusion. Richard also said how he could see i had done a lot of research which was clear in my essay.
Richard said i could change my essay if i needed to but it was relevant and i wasn't to make it a priority at this stage because it was a good level and the practical side of my cop would bring my grade up.
If i wanted to change my essay to get it to a higher grade i was suggested to:
- Add a few more sources
- Further back up points to make my points clearer.
- Triangulate once more to make it stronger.
Richard said if i had time and wanted to slightly change it that he was happy to meet with me to look through it and he would give me points and guidance to alter my essay. I will revisit my essay once i have completed the practical side.
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